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Gabriel Anast
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« on: September 07, 2007, 09:19:04 AM »

I watched seven days watch a man pass by
The didn't say much, just tipped their hats
   looking in at the motion that somehow
   spoke their names.
I settled back to listen as he
   greeted them in turn
   passing by again
He said,
Thursday's made for thunder because the ever living one spoke your frame.
Sunday's just a metaphor but I know how it is
   to wear someone else's name.
Tuesday looks as right as rain...
Wednesday's gifts are sweetly set in this refrain...
   coming round again.
And Monday's advent is heavy laden with
   four four meter of the silver lantern
   that watches us by night.

I watched seven days watch a man pass by
Pulling ties, smoothing edges,
   I saw their wives straighten creases as they watched him
   with starlight in their eyes.
And I caught his voice as he sang again
   to the ones that marked his going out and in

He said,
Friday is for lovers, Friday is the day lovers were made.
Saturday, Saturday... Saturday!
   My God breathed deep and full of joy,
   He took his sleep, and I next to him, Saturday.

I watched seven days watch a man pass by
   They didn't say much but they listened
   to his song and sighed
Their sons and daughters watched ever on
   and they loved him because he never
   stopped singing their song.

He said,
Friday is for lovers...

[note: I know the meter in this poem is not right... next I need music, but one of my regrets in this 35 years is that I have not learned to play the piano... someone else will have to do it Wink]

--gabe
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Gabriel Anast
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« Reply #1 on: June 11, 2008, 11:36:33 PM »

Please do... as a matter of fact, you can put any of my poems to music... also, ~esposita~ already put this poem to music... and its great... but, it is not publicly posted anywhere yet.

There is certainly room for more than one rendition... and I would love to hear it Wink

There is a (very simple) purchase-able media center built into the WTM store... and (at least at first) it will include a 7xS music section where users (anyone that has written music) will be able to upload their songs for others to purchase.

I hope to have the first piece of media (and herb video by Beka) up this week!

--gabe
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